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you come to me
with scars on your wrists
swearing this will
be the last night
feeling like this

everybodies watching you now
when the fear
is all consuming
it's all you can do
i dare you

you've so much more
to live for
you don't have to
die this way
it's all i can do
i dare you

run to me
i'll hold you
in my arms
i'm not strong enough
to take care
of myself
but i could hold the world
up for you
to crawl under
i dare you
trust me
<3
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:iconjessicaconk:
jessicaconk Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
The first stanza is Three Days Grace, is it not?
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:iconstuff7:
stuff7 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2009  Professional Writer
nope.
apparently it's skillet.
i didn't notice this till someone told me. :XD:
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jessicaconk Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yeah. Now I remember. I don't know why I said Three Days Grace
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I-Love-Disturbed Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009
this is really great. i wish i had someone like that.
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:iconstuff7:
stuff7 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009  Professional Writer
thanks.
me too.
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LillFlower Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009
:love:
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stuff7 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009  Professional Writer
:D
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lalalucky0307 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
amazing. lovely work :]
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stuff7 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Professional Writer
:D
thank you.
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lalalucky0307 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009
yo welcome!
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rawrkimmie Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
yeah... about that skillet thing...
i'm pretty sure the first part is almost verbatim :P


i really like this, peter :D
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stuff7 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Professional Writer
uhmmm... ok.
i definitely forgot.
because apparently i don't know my skillet as well as i should.

:D
hooray!
thanks :hug:
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rawrkimmie Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
and that's the only song i know by them :P

ahaha, it's okay :)


and you're welcome...
and thanks for the faves :3
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:iconstuff7:
stuff7 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Professional Writer
hahaha, that's kinda funny. (in an ironic sort of way)

:D

you're welcome.
again. :tighthug:
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individualism1994 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
my boy is like that for me : )
parts of this sound like The Last Night by Skillet <3
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:iconstuff7:
stuff7 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Professional Writer
really?
i thought i would've noticed that...
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individualism1994 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
the first part. listen to the song and its almost the same.
"You come to me with scars on your wrist. *Saying* this will be the last night feeling like this."
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:iconstuff7:
stuff7 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Professional Writer
oh wow.
and i know that song too.
i'm dumb...
:P
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:iconindividualism1994:
individualism1994 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
lol. i was just listening to it before i read that.
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stuff7 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Professional Writer
hahaha. nice!
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individualism1994 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
lol yup! im trying to learn to play it on the piano but sheet music is a pain in the ass to find online.
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:iconstuff7:
stuff7 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Professional Writer
nice.
hahaha, pretty much so. (:
good luck!
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bookworm-87 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
i wish i had a friend like that, i love it.
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:iconstuff7:
stuff7 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Professional Writer
me too...
thanks. :hug:
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bookworm-87 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
you're welcome:hug:
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hush-lullaby Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
Wow. What perfect timing.
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:iconstuff7:
stuff7 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Professional Writer
huh?
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hush-lullaby Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
It matches a situation someone I know is in.
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stuff7 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Professional Writer
oh, ok.
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Cynicalfire Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
wow... well this gets me here (points to heart) each time i read it... maybe cuz i can relate and i dont mean the cutting part but the friend who never leaves ur side no matter what... yup... definately a fav :D
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stuff7 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Professional Writer
thank you...
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Cynicalfire Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
your very welcome:)
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